All Comments on 'The Mentor Ch. 02'

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Only_connect about 3 years ago

Same as part 1: cock-centric (which is strange for a story listed under 'lesbian'), and clumsily written. It seems detached, like a summary or draft

lexstroker about 3 years ago

Don’t listen to the people who complain and have no examples of their own writing to share. It’s not like they’re forced to read anything on a FREE site. I thought this story was great. There is a reason why your stories consistently rate over 4 stars!

Hugo999 about 2 months ago

Enjoying the series so far thx

Flyer0124 3 days ago

Wow

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