All Comments on 'The Mermaid Slave'

Why do you hate women so much? Is it because you yourself have such a tiny cock and you want to misdirect your self hatred onto someone else?

Even that aside, this story was poorly written and lacked imagination. Show, don't tell if you want to be a great writer.

come on it's a story. Anyone has the right to write whatever he/she finds interesting why being so negative?

Story could have done with a little editing here and there, but overall it was a good effort. In response to the first commenter - try reading the authors bio, HE is a SHE!! So obviously she doesn;t have a cock!! derrrrr

Nice work, look forward to the next story.

The anonymous comment below saying you hate women is an idiot. It just a story I've read worse stories of forcing women then this, for godsakes its a merimaird why are you so offended. I think it was a good story but the problem is in the beggining out of nowhere the eelman just stuck his cock in her which ruined and took away the sexual tension and more character build up please

Hey

I like this story I hope there is a part two to this. I would like to know more about the eelman. I like that it wasn't all traditional and the author came up with her own character.

I wish it were longer

Thanks to everyone for your comments.

To those who are upset by my story, I apologise. It came at a time when I was a lesser writer and a weaker person. If it pleases you, feel free to rant against me; I probably deserve it.

And ignore the whiney little girl who thought you were a dude, obviously she is a she a had nothing better to do then bitch. However, maybe should have been in the non-consent section. Still, very nice.