All Comments on 'The Merman Slave Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I think I liked it better when Derrick was unwilling and trying to escape from Natasha's tentacle prison. Maybe we could have the effects of Natasha's octopus ink wear off from Derrick's mind and he becomes immune to it? Then Derrick will always try to escape from his captor but Natasha's too clever and her tentacles are too powerful to escape from, thus truly making Derrick a slave, always being wrapped up and toyed by Natasha and fucked against his will? Just an idea ^_^

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