All Comments on 'The Message'

OK story, but doesn't belong in the 'incest' category. And it needs a little proof reading which shouldn't have been too hard, like the odd capitalization, and spelling 'Chloe' as 'chloe' made it hard to read than needed.

Only 4 stars cause it wasn't incest. Other than that, good story.

The wife goes to bed he hears the bedroom door close. Then she ends up at the apartment waiting on him with the coed? How long did he take to decide? When did the wife leave?

In spite of the logistics I can't look past great start can't wait for the next chapter.

So much potential . . .

IMHO your speach to text program let you down. That and your failure to Proof Read !

Inconsistencies throughout indicate both factors.

Time-line though, how did wife get there first?

Wrong category