All Comments on 'The MILF List Diary'

Glad to see you back. You've given us so much great content it's impossible, for me at least, to be critical about you taking a hiatus. Still much shorter than that taken by Martin or Rothfuss!

Welcome back!!

Welcome back! I'm looking forward to reading Sonny's tale. On a personal note, I've thoroughly enjoyed the BDSM scenes in your stories. If you don't want Sonny to go directly down the BDSM / d/s path my recommendation would be to have another protagonist take the lead there instead. Sid Kingston comes to mind. It would be an interesting storyline to have Sid Kingston cajole Sonny and his sister's into participating in a hardcore BDSM scene with him and Sonny's mom.

Welcome Back!

Welcome back.

Glad to hear you have 2 chapters for the MILF List saga written.

Hope to also see more from your Fucking Investment series as well.

Welcome back. Looking forward to your further writings

I agree, welcome back. I have followed you from the beginning and will continue to do so, now that I have found you again. Just keep plugging along, you are doing fine.

I'm amazed you didn't burn out before you did, so I'll agree with the others that we owe you a debt of gratitude for the huge amount of material you did give us before your hiatus. I was a fan from the start and completely enjoyed everything you published up until the time Debra D started hijacking the story and things (in my opinion) started to go off the rails.

I understand and agree with the idea of Sonny growing and developing into responsible adult as the story wears on, but Debra D just feels like the type of woman Sonny would despise at this point in his life. She's vapid, self absorbed and completely immature. I think Sonny should have wrapped up things with his sisters and resolved everything with his mother before moving onto a traditional girlfriend. That said I had always hoped that eventually he and Alissa might end up together at the end this extended story.

My opinion would be that you don't have to have the entire story plotted start to finish. But having a few scenes that you feel are "hot" pre-planned with a satisfying climax and conclusion would allow you enough freedom to let the story organically grow would probably work.

Overall, amazing story that gave me dozens of hours of enjoyment to read through. I'll definitely be checking back in periodically. Thanks again for your work and good luck maintaining a high bar or writing excellence.

I'm glad to see you back. I don't know exactly when I started to read your work, but it must have been at least six years ago. I must say that I grew, or just that's how I like to see it, in this time. MILF List took part in defining of my sexuality, even if I wouldn't fuck my own mother. I remember fondly times when I saw after a few moths another chapter and being excited like a little girl. For the duration of your hiatus I was checking once in a while if you have written anything and lately I was doing it less and less. I'm now a bit relieved, that you wrote some more. I didn't yet read it, but I just want you to know that the whole story is precious to me. I have lately started writing myself (in my native language for now) and I think I understand your predicament - there are so many stories to explore and tell, so tying oneself to a specific line can be bothersome.

I wish you all the best regardless of how you will take the story further in all aspects of life.

Hi C glad to see you back and glad to hear you are getting back into writing again, and agree with the comments below. I have just checked back and read this and some of your work again. I agree with one of the commentators below, a BDSM series would be great, but then i think you know my views. Glad your feeling better and no matter what your health is worth more than anything so glad to hear your feeling better so keep safe and healthy

Keep up the good work

Chris

I am so glad to see you back. You have a god given talent for writing and your stories are enthralling. I am very sorry to hear that you are suffering from bad health, and though I am not a religious man, I will keep you in my prayers. You are an inspiration and I wish you improved health and divine inspiration for future chapters.

Wonderful, fascinating insite to an author that i have come to respect. I have read most at this point, amazed that you were able to transition from scene to scene, to situation etc., so that there's a continuity that can be followed. Thank you. Oh, Jai and Malenna is such a sweet story!

Well i've done it and finally finished your 'List' works, I only started last November and they have kept me gripped from start to end, congratulations on a well crafted enthralling series. Yes you probably need an Editor but who cares the writing is legible, in fact I thought you may have been using dictation software with the way it scans at times.

Stick with it I would love to get into 'The Slut List' but if your muse is giving problems then park it and see whats round the next bend.

What happens to Ellen? What about the Goshawks? This is good writing but we want more. Where does he take his ownership of pet next?

The Goshawks and sponsors should be a great story. Also, What happens to Alissa (& Ellen)?

I'm so hoping you can proceed with Sonny and the Slut List. So many unfinished storylines. Anne's niece, Almay, the punishment of Ellen, the British invasion, Chris's furniture business, the conversation with your mother, your trade of your sisters, your introduction into the BDSM world, the volleyball saga and a few more that escape me at the moment. Just getting over a bout with covid and your stories helped fill my days. The dreams at night became real. So I hope you reconcile with your muse(s) and give us what we can all appreciate. Thanks

I’ve never read any of your stories. I have never stapled a comment to a story. As i scrolled through your list, something caused me to choose this to be the first. I’m not sure why and do not care to think on it. Your enjoyment of words is very apparent and refreshing. Your explanations are:

- plainly understandable

- not formally organized, yet do flow together well

- candor is felt throughout

I’ll stop there.

It was very engaging and thank you for sharing.

Now i must wander into your other stories.

This was a really illuminating essay for me and I appreciate your authentic self-criticism and examination of your process. I have been a professional writer all of my career and know I have the same capacities for writing into a ditch, a corner, a dead end. Among the many stories I have enjoyed on this platform, my recent binge in the MILF list has been among the most thrilling. I liked the conceit of the list as a way to expand the mother-son trope and avoid some of the usual cliches. I admired your use of language and could guess that the repeated sex scenes would be hard to craft thematically with sufficient narrative variety. I think you did accomplish this. While my own reading doesn't usually include BDSM stories because the power dynamics are uncomfortable for me personally, I thought these elements in the MILF list were handled nicely and many were as arousing as you intended. Those long chapters were all pretty exciting with lots of action and I appreciated how you set up some situations to take advantage of surprise to the characters and readers, the public/observed sex scenes are a good example of this. I thought after the first "Making" chapter that I would lose interest with the first-person narrative, but you were skilled at letting Sonny's interior thoughts create a character we could

care about in a fantasy sort of way. I've written a few erotic stories on Literotica and hope some day that my own contributions can provoke the engagement yours did for me and so many others.