All Comments on 'The MILF of MILF and Sons'
by JBEdwards
- 13 Comments
legsfeettoes3 months agoIt's a shame your story ends at word 750. Maybe you and Ken can produce a sequel - a sequel as unrestrained as Jason and Anne. On the other hand, it is fortunate that the reader's imagination is unrestrained. Kudos to you. Five stars.
tennesseered3 months agoCan I make a banana cream pie joke? No? Too gauche, you say? How about the joke about the gastroenterologist looking up an old friend? Sorry. I'll sit down. Five stars, of course.
Alwaystaboo3 months agoTwo confident self actualized people can make beautiful love. So well written in content and mechanics.
Peter_Cleveland3 months agoWriting a 750-word narrative is a daunting challenge. I've been too chicken to try it myself. But JBEdwards has done quite a good job of it here.
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As I see it--and unusually, in Literotica--the story's narrator is but a minor character. The heart of the narrative is the tale of Anne and Jim Lasry, and that tale is told with extraordinary economy of words. Technically, Anne's behavior here constitutes revenge-fucking. Not nice. But it's done with such wit and humor--and such a light touch by both the author and Anne--that who could object? Besides, Jim's offenses include more than just extramarital sex without permission: he's also a lousy boss. I like Anne a lot. The arc of the matrimonial universe is long, but it bends toward polyamory. 5*
Pippa763 months agoClever title and loved the cheeky interaction between the characters. You're a skilled writer jb and I'm sure this entry will do very well. 5 stars from me.
Buster2U3 months ago10 Big Blazing Stars for a FUN short story. Lots of fun, MILF just for fun. Thanks, Buster2U
OGHMNW2 months agoThis hot erotic story is a perfect example filling the details in only those few words. I hope that Anne and Jason get to enjoy a second helping of dessert. The witty dialogue between them is a hot tease for the reader as well. Thank You! XO
rodryder442 months ago750 word stories are so short. There’s a very good introduction then Bam the end.
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