by davidmuleguy
You can't stop with no action. Either you write longer in order to include some action or you include it beforehand.
This said, the story has a very good start.
There ain't nothing wrong with checking out a persons good features. As for the staring, ur in a bar, it happens get over it. I hope this guy finds contentment somehow, I ain't fond of the idea of "curing" an interest that isn't so uncommon.
A good storyline but should have had some type of heated action before ending the chapter.
This is the 21st century< the days of women smacking men in bars for looking are over. He is in his right to defend himself from all 3 women, & file a complaint with the police.
Just to let readers know that The Mirror consists of 6 chapters, and that they are now all posted.