by moveablefeast66
That was GREAT!! As an older dude, the dream/fantasy of loving a young woman is incredibly erotic!! Great characters, great pace, great build up, and simply a GREAT story!!! 5- Stars for you MoveableFeast66!!
Well written, believable characters, coming to a turning point in their lives and making the turn in the right direction! Now I'm gonna have to read more of your stories, and hope they're this good.
I enjoy unique plausible stories where an ordiinary Joe gets to live out a fantasy he never knew he wanted. Well written and realistic. I don't know if there are still women out there who enjoy encounters like this, but I enjoyed one close enough before I was married and will never lose the memory.
Sparse dialog, but meaningful. A lovely if a bit unlikely story. As an older man it has a certain fascination, ummm except for being married.
I love mature stories and have a pretty strong breed kink so I came here looking for something to get off to. But nooo, you had to write a moving story with characters I cared about. Sure the sex was great 😊 but now I have to go through life wondering how these fictional people are doing. Full marks!