All Comments on 'The Mobster's Toy Ch. 01'

Loving these characters. I hope they have more chapters!

Definitely want to read more

I love this! Can’t wait to read more of their adventures and love story:)

Yes - continue

Moreeeeee

Please continue

More, More !!

Not a fan of M/M stories but this was truly amazing. Looking forward to the rest of your Beast & His Beauty story!

This was AMAZING, so well written and intriguing. Please keep it going!

If you hadn't mentioned that English is not your first language i honestly wouldn't have noticed. You definitely don't have to worry about your English, or your writing skills for that matter, you are really good. The story is hot but also interesting and I really wanna see how everything unfolds. Great start!!

@Anon, Thank you for kind words!

@ patinoandres12345678,

It means so much from you. But I had a great editor that helped me a lot, not every one of my stories is edited by him, so they my differ in English level.

The next chapter is ready and edited already - and is about to be published next week.

@BlowPopJ

Next week - 2 chapter :) Please follow :)

You r on my watchlist.

Great story, excellent writing more please!

A+.A different start to a story, which is a positive way to start. Enjoyable, yet different. Keep up the great work.

@mtm

Thank you, I appreciate your comment!