All Comments on 'The Mobster's Whore Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Brilliant chapter, love your writing style it really pulls the reader in. It’s still very dark and edgy but the characters are very vivid and believable.

Tess (uk)

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

U need to write more this is a brilliant story an u could go so much longer so much to explore for instance ‘who is Avery really’ an learn more about the stuff Aldine been up to

not_thereal_menot_thereal_meover 2 years ago

My new favorite series on here, cant wait for many more!

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