by leroyjunior123456
Hot. Can’t wait for more chapters. She should surprise him with both mommies.
A promising opener, can't wait to read the next chapter. I do hope there's a good blackmail section and revenge and cumupance for the other guy.
Thought it was pretty good, & like that he had a detour on the way to mom. The dialog just seems a little robotic, if you now what I mean. Still good, & I'll watch for part 2
The sex was fun. The story seems like it's getting ready to go somewhere other than to the cousins' sexual relationship. More please.
D&A
Nice story! Please continue!! I like short quick chapters so this is perfect. This could go on for quite a while.
Short, sweet, to the point...and FUN!!
The blackmailing of mom...that is not gonna work out well...but I have a feeling she will give in more easily than MC thinks...
Five Stars!d
Good story, moves well. Needs better editing for grammar to make it a better read.
Good job though, moving on to chapter 2.