All Comments on 'The Mommy Slut'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

More please

DunkirkDunkirkalmost 2 years ago

He needs to fuck his mom.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Hot. Can’t wait for more chapters. She should surprise him with both mommies.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

A promising opener, can't wait to read the next chapter. I do hope there's a good blackmail section and revenge and cumupance for the other guy.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Great! Keep writing!

lord_jefelord_jefealmost 2 years ago

Thought it was pretty good, & like that he had a detour on the way to mom. The dialog just seems a little robotic, if you now what I mean. Still good, & I'll watch for part 2

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

its a good start. i will wait to see what happens next.

Phlycpl210Phlycpl210almost 2 years ago

The sex was fun. The story seems like it's getting ready to go somewhere other than to the cousins' sexual relationship. More please.

D&A

YampowerYampoweralmost 2 years ago

Good start great story building up

Look forward to Him taking his mum

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Nice story! Please continue!! I like short quick chapters so this is perfect. This could go on for quite a while.

Mobile49Mobile49almost 2 years ago
Hot start

Can’t wait for more

Diecast1Diecast1almost 2 years ago

Like the story a lot. AAAA++++

MADDOGINTEXASMADDOGINTEXASover 1 year ago

Short, sweet, to the point...and FUN!!

The blackmailing of mom...that is not gonna work out well...but I have a feeling she will give in more easily than MC thinks...

Five Stars!d

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Good story, moves well. Needs better editing for grammar to make it a better read.

Good job though, moving on to chapter 2.

WargamerWargamerover 1 year ago

A fun tale. Scores 5/5

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