All Comments on 'The Monster Chronicles: The Minotaur'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Not a story...

This is not a story. It's a scene at best. How/why is 'she' there? Why did she go into the maze?

And what happens next?

GalazieGalazieabout 8 years ago
Editor maybe?

I really do like your stories, but there seems to be quite a few typos involved. I'm really trying to be kind in mentioning either maybe proofreading your writing or possibly get an editor to do it for you before publishing your work.

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