All Comments on 'The Monster Pt. 23'

Another 5* installment. Hot and funny. Thanks for sharing.

I can see this story going a long time. Best i have read in awhile. ty

Another fantastic fun and sexy read. Loving this series. Keep it up. Looking forward for the next part. 5stars

I like this story. Jake should try to get his teacher in bed again or try to get his aunt in bed. Or maybe try to get a 3some with Rose and Jo. I can't to see what will happen in chapter 24

Awesome story but where's the next chapter?

A lot less comments now that people have lost their reasons to angrily rant and call the author a con.

I’ve read the entire series over the last few days! I love where is is going! Keep it up, just like Jack! Lol!

Great story. The only thing that could possibly make it better would be if the chapters were a little bit longer

WOW! Another 5/5!

Can't wait for the next chapter, I think the next sore pussy will be aunt Rita's! :)

Been Following He Monster since Day #1. PLEASE CONTINUE,,,you have a Gift; PLEASE DO NOT KEEP IT HIDDEN!! #24 PLEASE...

Too many "um"s. #TeamClara

Will there not be another chapter??

I love this story I can't wait for the next chapter

Can't wait for another chapter me and my family can't wait for the next chapter

Omg cannot wait for another chapter! Love this story and want it to continue for a long time!!!!

Can't wait for next chapter great storyline

The author is taking a lot of time to update this or any other of his stories and he is in his right to do so but I can't help missing those times when he updated daily one or more than one of his stories.

Author is holding out on posting the. Ext parts til he makes enough money from selling them on his own site. Must not realize the majority of readers don't want to pay for poorly written/edited smut.

Story was good buy way to long. Should have cut it in half.

This can get interesting.