by directorx
Very good story. I loved reading this story & I hope that you will continue writing this story.
I love reading this series, it is very good. I hope that you will write another chapter to this story.
I don't comment often, but I really loved these two stories. You're a great writer; please write more!
Brilliant,more please,going to check your page now & read more of your tales
This easily could've been a 5 page story, without getting boring. Gonna actually miss the characters, like you would with a TV show that ends it's series.