All Comments on 'The Morning After Pt. 03'

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chytownchytownover 4 years ago
Damn That Was Hot!!*****

This story is only getting better very entertaining and sexy. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Keep going!

She needs to have that baby! He’s too young and hot and it would be the sexiest little train wreck!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Yes!

Best part yet! Excited for the pregnancy!

HragsHragsover 4 years ago

Wow.nothing like love at first date !!!

coolstrangeravenuecoolstrangeravenueover 4 years ago
knock. her. up.

this is amazing

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Awesome update.

Thank you for updating this story. Adriana and Jake are so hot together. I'm sure it will be awkward to tell their families, however they're right for each other. He's gonna find her so hot with a growing belly.

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyabout 4 years ago

Wow, long sentences with amazing number of adjectives and adverbs. Shorten sentences, not everything has to be described so flowery. A vagina can be just a vagina, not 'most sacred womanly anatomy'.

Got this far reading, but this is trying too hard to be literature.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Next one! Next one!

When is the next one coming out?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Where is this going?

You need to put these out faster.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
The Morning After

Next part please. Especially if he does knock her up and they start to plan their future together.

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