All Comments on 'The Most Exciting Night Of My Life'

by Saswati

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don87654don87654over 17 years ago
Good reading! But.....

Who is "he"? Who are "you"? No names or relationships involved, therefore the story is only half-complete. No scores on this one!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Great

I enjoyed the story particularly the way your man shaved your pussy hair. Really hot and arousing. Write more...

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Really arousing

Well composed. Is it real? Most erotic specially the paragraphs descibing shaving of pubic hairs. Want more....

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Fantastic..............

Lovely! The stories so for you have posted are promising. Keep on writing....

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
AROUSING...

Saswati, you have presented to your readers a very good erotic story. Who is the girl in the story? Such an erotic description can be written from the personal experience. Each time I read your story, my meat grows hard.

Write more....

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Beautifully erotic

Saswati, you are extremely talented. Your wtiting of this erotic story is more like you painting it. You draw such a beautiful picture of her pussy being shaved, of her satisfying him be a very beautiful blow job.

Keep writing, or should I say, KEEP PAINTING.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
UMMMMMMMMMMM..........

You write extremely well. A very sexy story. I have totally enjoyed your story this morning. When do you plan to write more? I am female.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Lovely romance story but...

This is a lovely romance story, but it is too short, in all aspects. There is no real introduction to the characters, no build up, no background, and no conclusion. The love scene is also too short and could certainly be enhanced. Even so, this is a very tender love story. It is good, but could have been much better.

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