by gobula
I thought you had Tomeric married off in Chapter 4. What happened to her husband? And I'm tired of seeing stories of perverted priests.
First shes getting married, than fucking a priest. Did i miss some thing?
great story line, but what happened. to big of a jump without explanation.
That last chapter kinda killed the story. But, hey, I'm just a reader.
Umm...what happened? The rest of the story was very hot. I was sure the last chapter was going to be a dream or a sex game between the couple...but no. Bizarre.
If this is a continuation from chapter 4 then you really botched the story without much of an explanation at all. After chapter 4 there should at least be an explanation for why they got divorced :/
2/5
You should have stopped @ 4. This just turned the whole thing sour.
This is a perfect example of “you either die a hero or see yourself become the villain”