All Comments on 'The Most Wonderful Girl Ch. 05'

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LutherTLutherTover 18 years ago
What is this???

I thought you had Tomeric married off in Chapter 4. What happened to her husband? And I'm tired of seeing stories of perverted priests.

regrabbit2004regrabbit2004about 18 years ago
WOW!

First shes getting married, than fucking a priest. Did i miss some thing?

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
?????

great story line, but what happened. to big of a jump without explanation.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Uhh...

That last chapter kinda killed the story. But, hey, I'm just a reader.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Very strange ending.

Umm...what happened? The rest of the story was very hot. I was sure the last chapter was going to be a dream or a sex game between the couple...but no. Bizarre.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Truly disgusting turn of events to a so far wonderful story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
what the fuck

It really suck

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Was hoping it was just a prequel...

If this is a continuation from chapter 4 then you really botched the story without much of an explanation at all. After chapter 4 there should at least be an explanation for why they got divorced :/

2/5

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Really?

You should have stopped @ 4. This just turned the whole thing sour.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Twist

This is a perfect example of “you either die a hero or see yourself become the villain”

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