All Comments on 'The Motherly Ghost'

A very descriptive story, yet I think the descriptions got in the way of the flow if the prose. And the most important description of all - whether the character is male or female was not in the story until a third of the way through. Also there was a jump in the story plot, with the character assuming that the ghost was female yet the author gave no indication as to why this could be a logical deduction. Apart from those two main points, a very good story.

So many ways this could be going! Why were people looking? Did they only see him? Or is it all in his head? Hope there is a sequel.

Loved this story. I hope you write more!

Excellent read... Loved it.

That was INCREDIBLE. I wasn't sure how I felt leading up to the reveal but I was so deeply hooked. I truly hope there is more to come; love it!