All Comments on 'The Mountain Pool'

Thanks for sharing.

Beautifully written piece.

But I'm confused. Did I miss something to make this a mature category submission?

I enjoyed this quite a lot. Thank you.

That was excruciating. Was that a porno story or a poetry contest submission??? Could not make it through to the end.

Nice prose, but overdone unfortunately. Also vague about how the characters knew each other. Author has talent but needs to exercise economy. Less is more.

Wonderful story that left me emotional