All Comments on 'The Movie Room Pt. 02'

Very well written and very hot!

I enjoy a more dominant sister, like the one you have written. Hope you write more.

Awe i an so invested in this story. I can't wait to read pt 3!!

It was great but you need to check the grammar there was quite a few errors. Other then that is a great story and hoping you will be putting part 3 up real soon.

This is so sooo awesome! I freakin love their connection and intimacy.. Thank you for this honestly beautiful piece!

So looking forward to more chapters!

Anxiously awaiting Chapter 3. Thanks!

They need to live together, be a relationship with each other, but act like bro & sis in front of the family and friends.

When you have feelings for someone, it hurts to be away for a second. Please continue with a lot of love and private marriage, children (Lot). Please. Best of the Best read today. No Breakups Please. Flow is just great. Don't break it.

Why are more people not rating this story 5 stars??? Great writing and am anxiously awaiting chapter 3.

This is a free erotic story site. The minor grammar mistakes mean fuck all. It’s not written as though a seven year old did it so for gods sake stop whining people. Probably why we’re not getting a part 3 which is a shame cause this is one of the cutest stories on here.

I gave you a 5/5 again. The last scene was incredibly tender. I loved it. There is obviously going to be a part 3, and I'm looking forward to reading it once you get it done.

I'm also amazed that you apparently have the same taste in movies that I have. Buckaroo Banzai with Peter Weller! Flight of The Navigator with Howard Hessman and Sarah Jessica Parker! Excellent movies both! I always wished that they would have made a sequel to Buckaroo Bonzai. Interviews with Peter Weller indicated that he felt the same way. He often said that BB was a better movie than Robocop and deserved a sequel.

Keep up the good work. If you want me to proofread your stuff and clean up the mistakes, hit me up with an email.

I've red almost all stories but this one is one of the best ever!!!

Even if you don't have another part, this was an excellent stopping point.

What a tease. Read both parts and they never have sex. Waste of time reading all that build up for nothing.

Great work! Tense and erotic and very well realized. A peek into some therapeutic fantasizing? Very much appreciated!

Please keep this story going! Fantastic build up; now go for the much anticipated next step.

Nice build up and emotional content with both chapters. 5/5. In one way the story stops at a perfect point, letting readers imagine the rest, though a continuation in chapters 3 (and beyond) would fit just as well.