All Comments on 'The Multi Story Car Park'

And that was terrible!

In addition to that small problem, there is also the issue with rape. She goes to police, gets a lawyer and *poof* no more money problems.

And that was great!

rape and mate is ok with this what shit . those sickos who enjoy this need a brain and real help

for there pleasure, some write because they can, you write because your retarded.

it's illegal to drive a car without at least third party insurance, which would have covered the damage to the Jag. But this 'writer' is so fucking ignorant, he doesn't know that. Crap story.

And, what assholes enjoy his shit.

Winched = used a winch, a power (usually) tool which pulls in a cable

. Winced = flinched.

'A long' not= 'Along'

'Passed' not= 'Past'

'Knarred' not= 'gnarled' or 'gnarly' -

. (or anything else - but I LIKE it as a pecker attribute!)

Don't mean to sound like DWartNuts, but she's 48 and you don't make the normal claim that she looks like a late-teenager! Prime age to be a major gang-bang target, sexy and naive !?! She gets home after being serially raped and you act like a 14-year old who gives no care AT ALL about her traumatization, at least compared to you finally getting some sqooshy pussy! I don't know where this belongs, but I DO know where the AUTHOR belongs! Either in 7th grade or an ASYLUM!

1* (which I VERY rarely 'award'!)

You blame the writer because YOU didn't like the story, or the theme? Wonder which theme they were looking for? Perhaps they don't understand the meaning of the word "slut" in the description and they thought it was about an amusement park????? And they have the nerve to call someone else an asshole?

As a story it was good enjoyed that he liked having her fucked as a slut but he was wishing he could see the action. as for it bing a one time thing NO Way they would be doing her lots of time as it was a Jag.

So lets have the next parts and hope he gets to watch her in action with the three guys

In a WACC brain

The point is that this "theme", if you can call it a theme, doesn't belong here. Post this crap in fetish or wherever but it does not belong in Loving Wives. Post it here and get low scores.

and she was allowed to stay in the home, get real

re-reading this did NOT improve it, or change my previous comments! Maybe I'll put a white-hot poker in both eyes to make sure I don't ever read it again

This one just sucks. Nothing else to say.