All Comments on 'The muse'

Honestly, I don't know why this is called 'The muse', nor why it's described as 'A short story, letter style'. I don't have a clue. With that said, you have the makings of something good, if only you had someone edit it and put in some punctuation. I can not handle reading lines and lines of text without a comma.

I enjoy 'furre' stuff, and this is nice and romantic, but really needs some more work before I could read it and really READ it without being bothered by the endless words with little punctuation.

between animals as it should be. TK U MLJ LV NV