by movieye
I think I would do the story some good if you had a scene where Oliver is coming into the Library and meets some girls (with one or two that know him), while also introducing the Librarians. It would set up the twist pretty well.
At my college, one of the bathrooms in the science building had a glory hole -- stick your dick in and get it sucked by an alien from Rigel or Tau Ceti or where ever, it was a matter of chance. The blow jobs were the best ever, but they demanded reciprocity, and while I don't mind usually, some of the things that got stuck back through the hole were, shall we say, challenging. I changed my major to accounting.
i thought Rigel or Tau Ceti was the name of your frats but google was my friend:)