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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Nice story

An original story line, well fleshed out. The doctir's naiivete was well portrayed. I might have wanted Fiona to be a bit more reserved and embarrassed to be acting the medical dummy, but I guess you had to tell the story you had to tell. We'll bone. Thanks.

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