All Comments on 'The Naked Lawyer'

The back story (how the narrator came to be a stripper) really isn't plausible - take it from an old lawyer

The story isn't improved by the narrator specifying she had DD tits - again, take it from an old lawyer, a woman who wants to be taken seriously in the legal profession will not get balloon size implants

And the rest of the story moves so fast it might be an article in the newspaper. Slow down, use dialogue to make the characters more real

Not to take a shot at lawyer's or politicians....however, gotta love the last shot!

You have the bare bones of an interesting story here, but that's it. There's no description, no dialogue, there's barely even a plot. Think about what the protaganist is feeling, why she makes the choices that she does, try putting it into words