All Comments on 'The Natural Fertility Clinic'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Fantastic!

I'm actually envious of these characters, lol

slideboyslideboyover 3 years ago
Love Man Stink

Great story. I've often thought that our preoccupation with not smelling and using colognes and perfumes leads to poor mate matches.

ArseniqueArseniquealmost 3 years ago

This is a great inventive story. Worthy of 5-stars. The main downside is an enormous number of typos and word switches. If you write more, and I hope you do, consider running it by an editor or proofreader before submitting it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

This was one of the hottest stories I’ve ever read. Couldn’t stop jerking off and smelling my own scents while I read it. Congratulations!

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