All Comments on 'The Natural Order of Things'

Nicely done. Solid!

Great story!! I loved the pregnancy risk.

HOT… for a cuck story!!! I loved the way Tameka was her husband’s big, black, cock pimp in the story!!

Epilogue: Cheating skank slut got pregnant and had a bi-racial bastard. She realized hubby was a sissy wimp cuck and destroyed him in the divorce both emotionally and financially. She thought she could move in next door but the neighbors just laughed in her face and told the stupid empty-headed bitch to take a hike. She's now just one more idiotic single mom trying to make ends meet. She fucked her kid over before he was even born.

Need a next part where you tell about hubby obviously failing to clean all of the sperm Carlos spewed into his wife. First the pos preg test, then the baby bump, a sonogram, and lastly the new baby.

Man aint hardly no brotha calls it a cock instead a dick, much less insist on it. This written by some white cuck for real. But dats ok cuck. We'll keep fucking your white women. No problem.

You just had to ruin a fairly good story by turning to a wimp/cuck ending.

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So happy to see another story from you! That was great!!!