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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Interesting and fun. Strange, but I like it.

Lola_BearLola_Bearover 2 years agoAuthor

I actually wasn't sure how to tackle a Winter Story challenge.

So for the most part I wrote this by the seat of my pants. I king of think the short format doesn't help the larger mythos I was hinting at. But glad you had fun with it!

texlootexlooover 1 year ago

That was a creative and entertaining holiday confection. It was loud, startling and ended in a red hit minute, as all Christmas crackers should. 'Five golden stars! Four cuming cocks, three French maids two naughty nuns, and a damp dick up an asshole.' My only complaint: I did not understand the significance of the name Cassandra.

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