All Comments on 'The Naughty Nymph Ch. 01'

This is very well written and shows lots of thought into the world building. I'm personally more.in tune with legal slavery systems that give potential happy endings. The characters themselves are well designed and have history. I'm very mucb looking forward to the next part. If I could give your 6 stars I would.

Thank you so much for taking the time to comment, feedback like this is what keeps me going :)

The next part is due next week and will introduce a few more characters with their backstories -- I hope you'll find them interesting as well! This series is more about having fun and learning how to write proper sex scenes, but I'll do my best to keep the world consistent.

interesting turn of events and cute characters.

I don't ever comment and didn't realize that this was a NEW new one... but I can't wait for the next one!!!

That means a lot, thank you :)

Great start, can't wait for more. Five stars.

A lot of legal slavery stories are about person who get enslaved, sometimes they are freed, but their slavery is main thing.

This...becomes too constant story element.

This story looks different so far.

I love the Joe Doe universe, we've got some great stories here on Lit. In my series the indentured servitude aspects are not at the center, but I try to make sure that it's all logical. It's not exactly serious literature, it's more about having fun with my characters. I still hope it's an enjoyable read :)

I just found this story series. Great fun. I kinda enjoy the slavery background in some stories, but I dislike brutality (guess Im just a big softie) and this story looks like it could tick all the boxes. Plus, its well written, with what appears to be likelable characters. Many thanks.