All Comments on 'The Negotiation'

by Jersey_philip

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I like it! Hope there’s more and she fucks him.

Floydman1Floydman1about 2 years ago

What a simultaneously sweet and sexy story! Great job. Not a lot of people can establish characters and relationships in so few words and with as much humor, like the characters were sort of wijing to the reader. Keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Your first story and already a great one! Many new writers struggle to make the sex scenes long and expressive, especially without also falling into repetitiveness. But you pulled off a story and a great shag all in one. Keep up the good work, ideally in the Trans category ;)

TeanteanTeanteanabout 2 years ago

I loved this. .... Unconditional love, hot sex, family approval & TS!!!!! Can't get any better!

roveroneroveroneabout 1 year ago

unless special day like bday, anniversary I wear a condom...minimises mess...still exquisitely tight....

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