All Comments on 'The Neighbor'

I was going to count how many sentences began with "you" or "He". I then gave up. I was going to try and determine how many sentences were subject, object, verb..I again gave up. If YOU had given this to a 4th grade teacher YOU would probably have received an F. I would recommend YOU writing it again. I am sure with some work YOU could be more grammatically correct.

First Person, please! :+))

Fuck I came halfway through the first page!

Glad you enjoyed it :)