All Comments on 'The Neighborhood Slut Ch. 01'

Your story is good, but it could really use an editor. Btw, why would her friend ask her months later about the video? Did they not speak to each other in all that time?

Nice start to your story really looking forward to chapter 2

the months and months mentioned are not in the timeline of the story occurring. it refers to the months she has spent after leaving her ex husband.

Wonderful. Great start. More please.

This might have been an interesting concept if the author had bothered to finish this. Unfortunately this is their first and last post (04/23/2020) as they've never written anything here again.