All Comments on 'The Neighbor's Ghost Ch. 01'

Such a creative premise, and with so much heart! I love the beginning, let's see where this leads...

Fucking your neighbors ghost would be terrific. my second mother neighbor always wanted to fuck her, later I realized she wanted to fuck me...blissful moments..

I hope you do continue it. I am so interested to read more

That it was the ghost of someone else. The pregnancy was a surprise! (Where's Chapter 2?)

I have started chapter two so many times I lost count, and every single time I started it kept going places that I didn't like. I might try to revisit it again, but I would need a strike of inspiration to get it going somewhere worth reading.

I liked the thought of this story, but the lack of grammar and editing really put me off. It was incredibly hard to make it through a few paragraphs. Also the writing has no continuous flow. It’s almost like the sentences are formed without any regard to the natural state of word structure. Idk. This was rough and I couldn’t even finish it