All Comments on 'The Neighbour'

It should be under gay male, not transsexuals and crossdressers.

Mmmmmm

Was certainly fun to read in my latest lingerie purchase.

:-)

Rebecca

A promising story ruined by the abuse of tense shifting, e.g.: "André was in the water and told me to be careful as the water was cold. I swim to try and recover myself from the beers."

This is sometimes done by experienced authors who know WHY they do it. If you don't know, avoid it like the plague. If you don't get the point, get an editor.

This is gay, not transsexual erotica.

What great descriptions of seduction and conversion. You are very convincing and I am pushed over the edge to wanting to be gay for a man as his girl after reading hundreds of stories of mind control gay, forced gay, reluctant gay, seduced gay, etc. Your story is one of the best show cases for a straight to become gay.

Is being a bottom in anal sex as good as you described? I have never touched another male's dick with my hand nor my mouth. I am a straight who is now wanting a patient, gentle, well endowed man to seduce me and teach me how to be his boy girl, having me suck and kiss his cock and take his hard dick into my boy-pussy; who will buy me lingerie and ask me to model it for him as he touches my body through the silky material.

How does a older straight man find a man to tutor him in being a bottom girl boy for him?

A beautiful sensual story, would love to read part 2 of this love story.

5*'s

I loved the gradual seduction and the eventual surrender to pleasure! Excellent story.

Make your mind up if you're telling the story in the third or first person.

As it is it doesn't work.

You can't have past tense and present tense in the same story.

Your story was great. From what I could gather given your writing, English may be your second language, so rather than lecture you on tense and all that I'll just say get an editor, as they can fix anything you may have missed. As it is i didn't have any issue reading your story

Thank you for this story.

not transgender gay romance