All Comments on 'The Neighbour'

Closeted gay anal scene ruined it

She should burn his stuff. Then shove a giant pole up his ass and see how he likes it.

This story didn't work for me from its start to the end

You need to write it more realistic. It was good. But some of the wording could be improved. Like how he was grabbing her, and he wouldn't have been able to fit in her ass. Not without lube. He would have torn her and made her bleed. She also would've gaged and threw up on him, the way he was forcing it in her mouth. Even experience doing deep throat will make you puke that way. But like I said, still a good enough story though.

Solid story all around; definitely not bad like some of these comments are saying.

Just letting you know: your story with the PhD student is no longer showing up on your profile. If that’s intentional, then that’s totally your right to take it down, but just letting you know I thought it was really good.

Started well but then it turned into a rape scene. Good effort but fell short for me sorry.