All Comments on 'The Neighbour Ch. 02'

Please get an editor.

How is this BDSM.?

That being said, I love BDSM stories. What this was about was the woman feeling powerless, and taking it to her husband. When he wakes up and finds her sleeping with the neighbor I hope he destroys both-now thats a story worth writing and reading.

These type of stories seem to bring strong feelings out in a lot of people , anger , disgust , jealousy , sympathy and sexual arousal . You know your story is well written when you can invoke some of these feelings in your readers . This story certainly invoked my feelings . Even though the author is the one whom stimulated these feelings in me , I cannot be angry at him or her , they’re not the ones cheating on their spouses, they just imagined it into script . I admire their ability to bring about these strong feelings from me ! This particular author not withstanding! Very good work

Oh, my god, that was … A BIG BOTCHED PILE OF SHIT !!!

About a braindead putrid cunt, written by an infantile, talent free part time scribbler.

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Please continue this story this is good story