All Comments on 'The Neighbour's Daughter'

would like to have seen them end up together

Very hot!

Perfect.

Didn't read Page 3.

Waste of time with "object" & then "vibrator"; use the same word (the latter) BOTH times!

Lots of spelling, word, punctuation mistakes.

Loved it! Flows well, eloquent wording, fairly believable. Keep writing.

All of old guys dream of a girl like Gina. Loved your story. Thanks for sharing it. Cheers. Frankie

Instant favorite. Perfect ending. Love the consensual nature of their relationship and especially the late night invasions.

Super story. Nice build up and ending. The unlikelihood of events was forgotten amidst great storytelling. Simply enjoyable- like a good lit story should be. Keep ‘em coming !

Brilliant,,,would love a neighbour just like Gina ,,,,

Anon - I didn’t notice any mistakes, but I enjoyed the story. I’m sure there are more constructive ways to critique the technical part of The writing

Wonderful story. What a nice plot. Thanks for developing this remarkable story. Will there be follow up chapters?

I live in a semi-rural area like this and while it's common for a neighbor to have a key it's really uncommon to lock yourself out when you are only going next door for a moment. We could have come up with something more creative here than constantly locking doors and grabbing keys.

Wonderful story and such great writing -- and no dick or tit sizes mentioned! Please consider writing a follow-up chapter (or more).

Not graphic enough for a five rating, I may have missed it but there was no sexy pussy hair described at all that I saw.