by Clavicus
Nice story. But I wonder why he is so afraid of his ‘partner’ Sally seeing him masturbating? Masturbating is natural and normal. She’d probably enjoy watching him or joining him.
Good premise.
But sex is too automatic. Lacks any tension.
Needs more dialog during sex. Does it feel good? Should I do more? Would you like me to ......?
Four stars.
"@NudeInMaine
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No wonder you're anonymous with that sort of shit. Are you 6?