All Comments on 'The Nephew Pt. 01'

I thought the very first one was bad enough, but I found this "gem" towards the end.

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Brian recovering moved round and entered her from behind, they soon had a rhythm going, Brian thrusting pushing Heather onto me, I didn't last long, emptying my load into her mouth Heather looked up, beaconed me to her, kissing her she passed my cum to my mouth, pulled away and said, "swallow!"

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Yep, you wrote that as one sentence. This is a quick and dirty edit.

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Brian, recovering, moved round and entered her from behind. They soon had a rhythm going, Brian thrusting, pushing Heather onto me. I didn't last long, emptying my load into her mouth. Heather looked up and beckoned me to her. Kissing her, she passed my cum to my mouth, pulled away, and said, "swallow!"