All Comments on 'The New Boss'

4*

On reading (was wondering why stars was so low), I sees a few inconsistencies and a couple of redundancies I shoulda caught before submitting. I promise next part will get better proofreading!

It is different, and a strange story, but is it weird enough? It’s a story that makes one wonder in which direction you’re actually going with it? If it is the first in a series then I think it needed to be an appreciably longer first episode and expansion. The writing was ok as was the story but something was lacking. Rightly or wrongly I feel that I can only give it 3⭐️ Perhaps it’s just not my type of story.

Prior to reading this I did enjoy reading two other stories by yourself and really enjoyed them.

Different start, will be interested to see where it goes