All Comments on 'The New Employee Ch. 01'

Great short story. I worked for a similar lady though not as demanding. I prefer demanding.

I'd like to see more! It's well written and with just enough 'back story' to keep it interesting. Maybe future installments could dwell on how the business got started as well as the jobs that the employees take on.

To the usual normal a-hole that likes to point out how this fantasy differs from "real life", so what? Move out of mom's basement, get a girlfriend, and STFU.

Wow. I'd love to work for this company!! Where do I interview?

Part two ??

All of your stories are great from the beginning. Well written and good descriptions and dialogue. The downside is everyone needs more. They end with me, the reader, saying “and then what happens?” I would enjoy reading more of your stories as well as finishing those that are presently on the site.