All Comments on 'The New House Ch. 01'

more pls

once that pussy gets wet there is no stopping the girl from giving in, can't believe she held her boyfriend off for five years what a dumb ass

There is nothing hotter than taking ALL of the slut, including her womb and DNA. He is right - get married for the sake of any baby they may create.

I hope you will bring out a lot mroe about rpeg risk sex in any continuation - keep up the good work.

I'd have given this a 5 had it not been for the careless typos and especially the grammar mistakes ("would do" instead of "did" — everywhere!)

"Would do" in this context implies past habits, when what's needed is the simple past, "did".

It's unfortunate, but your mistakes really spoilt what was otherwise a superb story.

Pity…

Some of this has already been commented on, but the language, the grammar, the extremely minimal punctuation... it all makes this a very tough read.

Rule # 1: Don't annoy the reader.