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Click here"Mom tossed it."
"I don't know how she does that. It shouldn't be possible."
"You are not going to believe this, but Susan does it too!"
"No shit!"
Great stories include great seductions, intense fucking, sucking, and cumming…this had it all, including my favorite fucking…swinging! Keep writing.
This feels like two stories. The first story was good. The second felt so disconnected from the first story that it had no impact and didn't feel like it followed its own internal logic.
This sorta feels like a bit more polished version of someone's fantasy. Has the hallmarks of a nice building up, but then when you're like "ok that was good, but I need it to be more extreme so I get off" it goes crazier. Also it hops from thing to thing and all the personalities just mesh without issue.
Fun, but not novel material.
I was liking the story but I couldn't finish it. The swinging killed the story for me. But not only the swinging; the parents were almost always absent in their son's life and in the end they almost seemed the parents of the year. I couldn't buy that. Susan seemed to be a moral person, not wanting to cheat on her husband despite how bad her husband was, and then, when we are told she is in love with Joe, and she should have only eyes for him, we are told that she was checking her father-in-law package (there's where I stopped reading) and it seems that she jumped to the swinging gladly. A big NO from me and 1* for leaving a very bad taste in my mouth. The end ruined totally the story for me.
what a mishmash, and her cluelessness hard to swallow-'what's a swinger...?'...
Nice and hot love story. The swinging with parents was a weird shock. As the other commenter below said, it destroyed the romance.