All Comments on 'The New Norm 02: Sex Games'

The last two scenes were good like the others except on steroids and I mean that I a good way.

Very hot stuff here. If I had one minor complaint it would be the denial of the threesome with Eliza. Hopefully we can see that if you do another chapter in the series.

I want to point out a particular scene that encapsulates what makes this story special.

"This girl is just full of surprises, Donner thought. Gone was the sexy vixen and the wild nymphomaniac whom he had fucked all night; in her place now was a doting mother hen. It immediately occurred to Donner that this adorable, endearing woman was the true version of Lola, and that realization made him extremely happy, for some reason. In fact, he was even more smitten with her now."

The dichotomy of Lola as a sexy vixen & doting mother hen is perfect! That her maternal instincts override her sex drive makes her truly shine. I thought that was so important to her character. It's a very cute and tender scene esp when Donner is smitten with the "true version of Lola".

Incest and noncon stories are not my thing, but I appreciate thoughtful writing when I see it.

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Haha! I actually did start writing a sequence where Derek breaks out of his bonds and basically ravishes both his mother and Eliza. But I really wanted that scene to focus on Lola teasing him, and how the teasing made him so hot for her.

But who knows, maybe I'll bring Eliza back in a subsequent chapter.

Thanks for your feedback!

Kinky stuff here and Syzoth delivers heaping portions. The opening paragraphs are quite good; very descriptive and they set the stage for what follows. Such a shame that Derick was denied the hot Asian babe. I'm sure a rematch could be arranged. I'm normally not interested in mother-son incest stories but I make an exception here.

Thank you, my dear friends, for your input.

I know that neither of you particularly enjoy incest stories, but I'm grateful that you at least appreciate the process and the product.

If only everyone would apply that kind of open-mindedness to ALL aspects of life!

-Sy

You NEVER share your mother or your sister. You ruined a really good story

You NEVER share your mother or your sister. You ruined a good story