All Comments on 'The New Patriarchy Pt. 01a'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

The hymen does not work that way.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

A little short. Will she be alles so keep going to colege?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

A wee bit short and the beginning could have been a bit more descriptive of how the countries came about the new laws and how they dealt with the protests. I am kind of surprised that Jess did not go out looking for women to enslave nor that women could enslave themselves. Some women would try to hide or find someway not to get listed as possible slaves. I can see a lot more chapters of Jess loaning out Emma from time to time, as well as finding out just how far he can push her limits in bondage, whippings, gangbangs, gloryholes, exhibiting her body in sexy clothes with her collar and leash, maybe some shock dildos and butt plugs, piercings, etc. Hopefully they will work out a safe word and build a good working relationship with each other.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Run-on sentences make this difficult to follow. Almost every paragraph is just one sentence?

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