All Comments on 'The New Recruit Pt. 04'

Not sure I know which perspective I like better. Either way, the story is still very well written and HOT as hell. I like that you're making CJ more dominant as this goes on. Hot frat boy Bobby is also an interesting addition. Looking forward to hearing about CJ's threesome in part 5. Thanks, MLF

Third-person worked for me. However you write it, I’ll read it! Five Stars!

Author’s note: After this installment posted, I realized that I’d mixed up Brian and Eric. Eric is Donny’s husband, not Brian. I’ve submitted an edited version, which should replace this one at some point. Edits are taking a while to get approved these days!