by RootOfTheStory
I like the story quite a bit and am hoping the author will be able/willing to continue writing. Seems to have plenty of room for growth. Looking forward to many more chapters.
This story is absolutely one of the best of the mind control. Great balance of story and sex. Kinky, but not so degrading as to completely overwhelm the story.
This is a really slick story and it's only just warming up! I'd appreciate a little more blow by blow rather than just a "take off your clothes" command
Thank you for sharing your interesting mind! Please keep writing erotica. Please.
I keep checking in for a new chapter. Hope you find time to write the next chapter!