All Comments on 'The New Show Ch. 03'

I didnt really know what to say other that its too short for my personal taste. Your writing is ok, but it felt kinda jumpy and i didnt really get what you were aiming for. I can imagine it appeals to other people but it doesnt cater for me. It is still better than some of the stuff i have read on here, so good luck writing in the future :)

Rita should have kept you to herself. Indulging in such things at work is not good.