All Comments on 'The New Year Party Ch. 03'

Great story looking forward to Jack's next adventure 5 Stars, I would give 10

Every Chapter war 5 Stars a great read

Enjoyed every chapter looking forward to your next story

I love your stories and looking forward to the next

I liked this story, but you really rushed the ending. The sex scenes were detailed well and you ending was basic. Keep up the good work, you’ll get there.

I loved the ending, most of the time when you or other authors write about getting pregnant. Hardly anybody finishes it. For example your last series, the daughter wanted to get pregnant and you stopped. I hope that you finish it.

more of these characters please

This was worth each of the five stars. I hope you develope the story into futher chapters at the new hotel. , regards

Harem tales can be great or really stupid. The writing style is still very hard to get into. Your sex scenes are cookie-cutter copies even within one story. The most intriguing part of this chapter was the final two sentences. You threw it in like you were fed up and just wanted it to be over. Try to tell the sex scenes without the people just speaking all the stage directions aloud the entire time. It's especially silly when her mouth is supposed to be literally stuffed with his massive Prince yet she's speaking to him of what's happening to his dick as if he's not there. LOL