by Montgomery Quinn
... It totally sounds like this is going to continue. I really hope that's not just wishful thinking on my part, but it seems like there is a lot of interesting stuff that could happen, since Amber (and we) still has (have) a lot left to learn about being a futa.
I'm excited to see your take on the futanari genre. I've really enjoyed all your stories I've read so far, and I am a fan of this genre for the most part (not a big fan of futa+man or the stories that go too far with Dom/sub content... Those stories tend to throw romance right in the garbage and burn it). So, while I would love to read the next part of "Beast", I wouldn't mind it being put off a bit while you also work on this story.
Thanks!
So much world building but I feel there's a lot more to the Organization that we have yet to learn.
I really hope you find more time for this, but I want a sequel to the beast too!
You failed biology 101 and some stars with the comment "I peed from my vagina like normal".
Dear anonymous reader.
Please refer to the literal biology lesson located at the bottom of page 1.
Thank you for reading
A very yummy start! Normally I'm not a fan of most futa stories, but this one is off to a really great start! Keep the loving perspective! Thank you!
I really enjoyed this chapter, and am looking forward to chapter 2. Thank you for sharing this with us!
I really am enjoying your story. I haven’t read a lot of Futa stories but so far this is in the top 5. Look forward to the next chapter.
Great premise but... Even for a fantasy, it seems rather abrupt. The counselor went from professional to slut in just a couple of paragraphs. Jane went from just a friend to slut in a whisper, and before the reader gets used to that the 'L' word is tossed around casual like.
Unlike the wonderful "Rose" or "Beast" stories, this one lacked any setup by comparison. I LOVE the idea but wish it was more developed.
The tag line is “I’m too young to grow a dick”, but the story says that she’s the oldest one to have the change. So, which is it?
Ok, so if futa was in the title, I would have skipped it. That said, I'm somewhat intrigued.